Writing shorter

Well not the idea while writing this here not. Lately i've been working on writing as few words as possible when writing letters, emails, and the like.
To practice this, and test the waters a bit, I've been writing to a friend in a general "Haiku" form.
This is an exercise to remove extra/unnecessary information and put more thought into word choice.

I wonder how long it will take before she notices my uncommon sentence structure.